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I took the train to nowhere
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I took the train to nowhere
where seats are dust
and passengers are ghosts.
Yes, the train to nowhere.
Nowhere I go, go round and round
I scream and shout
but there's no one around
to hear my words.
Are you in this train too?
I don't want to know, don't want to see
'cause you're the reason I'm here
and for this fact I hate you.
Crying mechanics, wheezing steam
We go nowhere it seems.
Isn't it a perfect time to die?
In the wagon of doom I sit and cry.
Blurry vision, melting colors,
All is shaped liquid and grey.
For fear and pain are ours,
I want the end of this day.
where seats are dust
and passengers are ghosts.
Yes, the train to nowhere.
Nowhere I go, go round and round
I scream and shout
but there's no one around
to hear my words.
Are you in this train too?
I don't want to know, don't want to see
'cause you're the reason I'm here
and for this fact I hate you.
Crying mechanics, wheezing steam
We go nowhere it seems.
Isn't it a perfect time to die?
In the wagon of doom I sit and cry.
Blurry vision, melting colors,
All is shaped liquid and grey.
For fear and pain are ours,
I want the end of this day.
In the mood for a crappy poem.
© 2013 - 2024 ChildOfClouds
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I love the feel of this one, not quite sure of your wording on the second line "where sits are dust", but as a whole, the line doesn't exactly detract from the power of your words.